https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/ silvercat17 - Dreamwidth Studios Mon, 11 Jul 2016 02:33:21 GMT LiveJournal / Dreamwidth Studios silvercat17 personal https://v2.dreamwidth.org/16941083/677317 https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/ 100 100 https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/59975.html Mon, 11 Jul 2016 02:33:21 GMT https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/59975.html <p><small><i>Excerpt from <a href="http://www.silversspace.com">Silver Does Stuff</a>. <a href="http://www.silversspace.com/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/">See it all</a> (Why not post it all here? -Because I always forget to put in a cut and then long posts flood people's friends pages)</i></small></p><p>So the old version was before I decided that one of the Lloyd siblings should be a girl. Same trigger warnings apply:  immobilization / claustrophobia, discussion of blood. Honestly nearly all the changes are just to pronouns (I may have made one other change?) We knew when the final meeting was going to be, and [&#8230;]</p><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=silvercat17&ditemid=59975" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/59975.html series:puzzle-verse edit vignette scifi puzzle-verse writing stories whump public 0 https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/49413.html Wed, 01 Apr 2015 23:58:37 GMT https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/49413.html <p style="text-align: right"><small>Mirrored from <a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/" title="Read Original Post">Shenanigans - Curiously Lydean</a>.</small></p><p>So the <a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2013/08/writing-function/">old version</a> was before I decided that one of the Lloyd siblings should be a girl. Same trigger warnings apply:  immobilization / claustrophobia, discussion of blood. Honestly nearly all the changes are just to pronouns (I may have made one other change?)</p> <p><a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/#more-1391">Read the rest of this entry &raquo;</a></p><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=silvercat17&ditemid=49413" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments https://silvercat17.dreamwidth.org/49413.html whump edit scifi series:puzzle-verse writing vignette public 0