tag:dreamwidth.org,2010-11-30:677317 silvercat17 silvercat17 2016-07-11T02:33:21Z tag:dreamwidth.org,2010-11-30:677317:59975 2016-07-11T02:33:21Z 2016-07-11T02:33:21Z public 0 <p><small><i>Excerpt from <a href="http://www.silversspace.com">Silver Does Stuff</a>. <a href="http://www.silversspace.com/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/">See it all</a> (Why not post it all here? -Because I always forget to put in a cut and then long posts flood people's friends pages)</i></small></p><p>So the old version was before I decided that one of the Lloyd siblings should be a girl. Same trigger warnings apply:  immobilization / claustrophobia, discussion of blood. Honestly nearly all the changes are just to pronouns (I may have made one other change?) We knew when the final meeting was going to be, and [&#8230;]</p><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=silvercat17&ditemid=59975" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments tag:dreamwidth.org,2010-11-30:677317:49413 2015-04-01T23:58:37Z 2015-04-01T23:58:37Z public 0 <p style="text-align: right"><small>Mirrored from <a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/" title="Read Original Post">Shenanigans - Curiously Lydean</a>.</small></p><p>So the <a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2013/08/writing-function/">old version</a> was before I decided that one of the Lloyd siblings should be a girl. Same trigger warnings apply:  immobilization / claustrophobia, discussion of blood. Honestly nearly all the changes are just to pronouns (I may have made one other change?)</p> <p><a href="http://www.curiouslylydean.net/2015/04/puzzle-verse-doll-eyes-updated/#more-1391">Read the rest of this entry &raquo;</a></p><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=silvercat17&ditemid=49413" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments